WIPpet Wednesday…. a WIP that’s….not really a WIP =P

I might be breaking the rules a bit, but I don’t want to give you the tentacle erotica at all. So … I’m going to give you a bit more from the sci-fi short I gave you last week. I just submitted it on Sunday, so here’s to hoping I hear back soon. *crosses fingers*

So here you go! My WIPpet that’s not really truly a WIPpet anymore.

For the second of July, you get two lines from page 14. So…. here you go

“Where are we going?” Laila asked and glanced at the cave entrance.

“To fight a war.”

If you would like to join in WIPpet Wednesdays, all you have to do is post an excerpt of your work in progress (unlike me) on your blog and link it up here. Make sure your post correlates with the date somehow! Then check out all the other posts.

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20 Comments (+add yours?)

  1. Amy
    Jul 02, 2014 @ 07:10:38

    I love the new design of your page. Very nice! As for the snippet…that’s quite a teaser. I hope you hear back with good news. :)

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  2. Elaine Jeremiah
    Jul 02, 2014 @ 12:04:19

    ‘To fight a war’ – sounds like it’s more like an epic novel than a short story lol. But knowing you (sort of!!) I’m sure it’s fab. :)

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  3. shanjeniah
    Jul 02, 2014 @ 15:43:38

    Oh! This was short and tense, with the promise of more. Glad you shared, even if it’s not a WIP anymore! =)

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  4. ReGi McClain
    Jul 02, 2014 @ 16:47:05

    Cue foreboding music. :-)

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  5. rachelalsowrites
    Jul 03, 2014 @ 01:03:23

    Intriguing! I love little snippets like this! Hopefully it gets accepted, I want to know what happens in the rest of the story!

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  6. kathils
    Jul 04, 2014 @ 08:06:24

    Nice little tease there. Into a cave to fight a war…and then????

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  7. booksbysmiles
    Jul 06, 2014 @ 15:58:30

    I think we’re all pretty lenient on the WIP rules. Breaking them now and then is fine. You may sport a bruise or two, though. ;) They were given with love. You already know this, but I’ll say it again. Love the new layout!!! It’s inviting and comforting and the flowery thing at the top… yeah, loves!

    Reply

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